Tuesday, April 27, 2010

Reddie the Teddy

Yesterday I listened this song on radio and loved its lyrics.....so I used some part of it and made a new poem out of it. Copy ka funda aise hi aata hai filmmakers ko now I know egg-xactly! Any ways sometimes chalta hai na... so its my Copy karna chalta hai waali poem :D :D


I was five & he was six
We ride on the horses
Made of sticks
I fell down
And hit the ground
That awful sound
Bang Bang!

He was there smiling
At me with his sound tinkling
And eyes twinkling
I hated him for that moment
And I hit the ground
With my hand and again that awful sound
Bang Bang!

But I couldn’t shout on him
He was my only lover, buddy
He was the love of my life
He was my sweetie
Darling Reddie the Teddy!

       

1 comment:

  1. i dont know that song so cant tell u egg-xactly what u copied... however its nice so keep it up !!!

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